Jalal (Glory), 9 ‘Ilm (Knowledge), 172 BE - Saturday, October 24, 2015 about 1:55 PM Pacific Daylight Time
There are seven days left in October. Seven days until Daylight Savings
Time ends. Seven days to deal with the rest of October's weirdness. This
year October has been a bit weirder then previous years, but I'm not
sure why. I've had difficulty focusing on writing poetry this month.
Normally I have no problem coming up with a theme and subject. In the
past, I've had no problems following the specific form of a poem so that
the rhythm flows properly.
This month I attempted to write an English sonnet. I got the syllable
count and the rhyme scheme down fine. I stumbled over the rhythm, so now
I have to rewrite the poem to get the rhythm right. The problem is
whenever I start to rewrite, I stare at the screen or the page wondering
how to change the poem to fit the rhythm. I suppose I could just give
up and write another poem using the same subject and theme. However,
that doesn't seem right. I can't give up the idea that this poem, with a
bit more work, can become a perfect English sonnet. I wonder if William
Shakespeare encountered this problem when he was writing English
sonnets.
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